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d_, _equally important_, _another interesting problem is_, _for this reason_, _the remedy for this_, _so much for_, _it remains to mention_, _of course I admit_, _finally_. (For a longer list see 36.) Such phrases are also useful in linking one paragraph to another. When a student first learns the art, he is likely to use transition phrases in excess, and produce something like the following: "When I have to write a theme, I first think of my subject. As soon as I have my subject, I take out my paper. On the paper I then make a rough outline." This abuse of transition causes an overlapping of thought, like shingles laid three inches to the weather. An abrupt transition is better than wordiness. Exercise: 1. The shore looked far off. Then we reached it. 2. A light snow was falling last night. This is a good day for hunting rabbits. 3. A dollar is often a large sum. I sold newspapers when I was a boy. 4. Many English words still preserve their old meanings. There is the teller in the bank. 5. We had to walk half a mile across the pastures in the fresh morning air. Exercise indoors does not arouse much zest or enthusiasm. =9.= EXERCISE IN COMPLETENESS OF THOUGHT =A. Fragments Misused as Sentences= Rewrite the following statements in sentences each of which expresses a complete thought. 1. He gave me a flower. Which was wilted. 2. The gasoline flows through the supply tube to the carburetor. Where it should vaporize and enter the cylinders. 3. People of all ages were there. Old men, young women, and even children. 4. He told us that you had a good standing among business men. That you always met your bills promptly. 5. Excuse Everett Smith from school this morning. He having the measles. 6. The internal combustion engine may be either one of two types. The two cycle or the four cycle. 7. The young men and women acted like children. Who should have known better. 8. There was a cross cow in the pasture. Which had long horns. 9. Bacteria are microscopic organisms. Especially found where milk or some other substance decomposes. 10. We pass on down the street. The buildings rising two or three stories high on either side. 11. The Y. M. C. A. enables you to keep your religious interests alive. As well as to associate with cle
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