t wide and four thick, and one of them weighing about
five hundred pounds.
5. Considerations of economy that one should bear in mind when
planning a house are: first, a rectangular ground-plan; second,
a one-chimney plan; third, to have only one stairway; fourth,
eliminate as many doors as possible; fifth, the bathroom should
be above the kitchen so as to reduce the cost of plumbing; and
lastly, the rooms should be few and large rather than small and
many of them.
=Correlatives=
Conjunctions that are used in pairs are called correlatives; for
example, _not only_ ... _but also_ ..., _both_ ... _and_
..., _either_ ... _or_ ..., _neither_ ... _nor_ ..., _not_ ... _or_ ...,
_whether_ ... _or_ ....
=31. Correlatives should usually be followed by elements parallel in
form; if a predicate follows one, a predicate should follow the other;
if a prepositional phrase follows one, a prepositional phrase should
follow the other; and so on.=
Faulty: He was not only courteous to rich customers but also to
poor ones. [Here the phrases intended to be balanced against
each other are _to rich customer's_ and _to poor ones_. As the
sentence stands, it is the word _courteous_ that is balanced
against _to poor ones_.]
Right: He was courteous not only to rich customers but also to
poor ones.
Faulty: She could neither make up her mind to go nor could she
decide to stay.
Right: She could neither make up her mind to go nor decide to
stay. [Or] She could not make up her mind either to go or to
stay.
Faulty: I talked both with Brown and Miller. [Here one
conjunction is followed by a preposition and the other by a
noun.]
Right: I talked with both Brown and Miller. [Or] I talked both
with Brown and with Miller.
Exercise:
1. He was courteous to both friends and his enemies.
2. Such conduct is not only dangerous to society but becomes a
national disgrace as well.
3. She had neither affectation of manners nor was she
sharp-tongued.
4. After reading Thoreau's _Walden_ I appreciate not only the
style but also I am inclined to believe in his ideas.
5. The good that the delegates derive from the convention not
only helps them, but they tell others what happened.
CONSISTENCY
=Shift in Subject or Voice=
=32. Do not needlessly shift the
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