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t wide and four thick, and one of them weighing about five hundred pounds. 5. Considerations of economy that one should bear in mind when planning a house are: first, a rectangular ground-plan; second, a one-chimney plan; third, to have only one stairway; fourth, eliminate as many doors as possible; fifth, the bathroom should be above the kitchen so as to reduce the cost of plumbing; and lastly, the rooms should be few and large rather than small and many of them. =Correlatives= Conjunctions that are used in pairs are called correlatives; for example, _not only_ ... _but also_ ..., _both_ ... _and_ ..., _either_ ... _or_ ..., _neither_ ... _nor_ ..., _not_ ... _or_ ..., _whether_ ... _or_ .... =31. Correlatives should usually be followed by elements parallel in form; if a predicate follows one, a predicate should follow the other; if a prepositional phrase follows one, a prepositional phrase should follow the other; and so on.= Faulty: He was not only courteous to rich customers but also to poor ones. [Here the phrases intended to be balanced against each other are _to rich customer's_ and _to poor ones_. As the sentence stands, it is the word _courteous_ that is balanced against _to poor ones_.] Right: He was courteous not only to rich customers but also to poor ones. Faulty: She could neither make up her mind to go nor could she decide to stay. Right: She could neither make up her mind to go nor decide to stay. [Or] She could not make up her mind either to go or to stay. Faulty: I talked both with Brown and Miller. [Here one conjunction is followed by a preposition and the other by a noun.] Right: I talked with both Brown and Miller. [Or] I talked both with Brown and with Miller. Exercise: 1. He was courteous to both friends and his enemies. 2. Such conduct is not only dangerous to society but becomes a national disgrace as well. 3. She had neither affectation of manners nor was she sharp-tongued. 4. After reading Thoreau's _Walden_ I appreciate not only the style but also I am inclined to believe in his ideas. 5. The good that the delegates derive from the convention not only helps them, but they tell others what happened. CONSISTENCY =Shift in Subject or Voice= =32. Do not needlessly shift the
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