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ry does not fulfill. It should be based on the facts as set forth in the story and nothing else." The head should be a bulletin or summary of the important facts, not a mere label. It is usually best to base the head on the lead of the story. The first deck should tell the most important feature. Every succeeding deck should contribute new information, not merely explain previous statements or repeat them in different language. The function of the head is to tell the facts, not to give the writer's comment on the facts. The head for the feature story, the special department, the editorial or the illustration may properly be a title that suggests the material it advertises instead of summarizing it. Indeed, the success of a feature story often depends on its having a head that directs the reader to the story and arouses his curiosity in it without disclosing the most interesting content. Head writers should beware of revealing in the head the surprise of a story, if it has one. Never turn in a head that you _guess_ will fit. Make sure. Heads that are too long cause delay and confusion. As a general rule write heads in the present tense. Principal words should not be repeated. Do not, however, use impossible synonyms, as _canine_ for _dog_ or _inn_ for _hotel_. Make every deck complete in itself. Use articles sparingly. Occasionally they are needed. Observe the difference in meaning between _King George Takes Little Liquor_ and _King George Takes a Little Liquor_. Avoid such overworked and awkward words as _probe_, _rap_, _quiz_, _Russ_. Never abbreviate _President_ to _Pres._ Avoid ending a line with a preposition, an article or a conjunction, as, TO MAKE PLANS FOR AMERICAN DEFENSE Do not divide phrases, as, CUT IN SCHEDULE "K" IS PROBABLE CAMP PICKS ALL- AMERICAN TEAM Try to make each line of the first deck a unit, as, POSTOFFICE ROBBED BY BAND OF TRAMPS TARIFF BOARD REPORTS ON ALL WOOL SCHEDULES STORY OF DYING MAN REOPENS GRAFT CASE Observe that in reading these heads there is a natural pause that comes at the end of the line. The same principle may govern the writing of three-line heads, as, ONE GIRL'S ACT PREVENTS 60,000 FROM WORKING WAYNE MEN WANT CANAL TO CONNECT CITY WITH DETROIT In the head just written observe that the first line h
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