irth of Time_----.--[MS.]
[jx]
----_even let me view_
_But good alas_----.--[MS.]
[jy] {268} ----_in both we shall lie slower_.--[MS. erased.]
[328] [The substitution of "one" for "both" (see _var._ i.) affords
conclusive proof that the meaning is that the next revolution would do
its work more thoroughly and not leave things as it found them.]
[329] {269} [After sunset the Jura range, which lies to the west of the
Lake, would appear "darkened" in contrast to the afterglow in the
western sky.]
[jz] {270} _He is an endless reveller_----.--[MS. erased.]
[ka] _Him merry with light talking with his mate_.--[MS. erased.]
[330] [Compare Anacreon ([Greek: Ei)s te/ttiga]), _Carm._ xliii. line 15--
[Greek: To\ de\ ge~ras ou)\ se tei/rei.].]
[kb] _Deep into Nature's breast the existence which they lose_.--[MS.]
[331] [For the association of "Fortune" and "Fame" with a star, compare
stanza xi. lines 5, 6--
"Who can contemplate Fame through clouds unfold
The _star_ which rises o'er her steep," etc.?
And the allusion to Napoleon's "star," stanza xxxviii. line 9--
"Nor learn that tempted Fate will leave the loftiest _Star_."
Compare, too, the opening lines of the _Stanzas to Augusta_ (July 24,
1816)--
"Though the day of my destiny's over,
And the _star_ of my fate has declined."
"Power" is symbolized as a star in _Numb._ xxiv. 17, "There shall come a
_star_ out of Jacob, and a Sceptre shall rise out of Israel;" and in the
divine proclamation, "I am the root and the offspring of David, and the
bright and morning _star_" (_Rev._ xxii. 16).
The inclusion of "life" among star similes may have been suggested by
the astrological terms, "house of life" and "lord of the ascendant."
Wordsworth, in his Ode (_Intimations of Immortality, etc._) speaks of
the soul as "our life's _star_." Mr. Tozer, who supplies most of these
"comparisons," adds a line from Shelley's _Adonais_, 55. 8 (Pisa,
1821)--
"The soul of Adonais, like a _star_."]
[332] {271} [Compare Wordsworth's sonnet, "It is a Beauteous," etc.--
"It is a beauteous evening, calm and free,
The holy time is quiet as a nun
Breathless with adoration."]
[333] [Here, too, the note is Wordsworthian, though Byron represents as
inherent in Nature, that "sense of something far more deeply
interfused," which Wordsworth (in his _Lines_ on Tintern Abbey) assigns
to his own consciousness.]
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