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and soften private society, are to be dissolved by this new conquering empire of light and reason." If the words italicized were omitted, the transition would be too abrupt: the conjunction _but_ alone would be insufficient. FOOTNOTES: [5] _For_, at the beginning of a sentence, sometimes causes temporary doubt, while the reader is finding out whether it is used as a conjunction or preposition. [6] _It_ should refer (1) either to the Noun immediately preceding, or (2) to some Noun superior to all intervening Nouns in emphasis. See (25). [7] So useful that, on mature consideration, I am disposed to adopt "that" here and in several of the following exceptional cases. [8] Of course "and which" may be used where "which" precedes. [9] "That which," where _that_ is an _object_, _e.g._ "then (set forth) _that which_ is worse," _St. John_ ii. 10, is rare in modern English. [10] Sometimes the emphatic Adverb comes at the beginning, and causes the transposition of an Auxiliary Verb, "_Gladly_ do I consent." [11] Of course punctuation will remove the ambiguity; but it is better to express oneself clearly, as far as possible, independently of punctuation. [12] Professor Bain. [13] See (30). [14] The repetition of Auxiliary Verbs and Pronominal Adjectives is also conducive to clearness. [15] Professor Bain says: "In the epigram the mind is roused by a conflict or contradiction between the form of the language and the meaning really conveyed." [16] This metaphor is not recommended for imitation. * * * * * BREVITY. *46. Metaphor is briefer than literal statement.* See (13). "The cares and responsibilities of a sovereign often disturb his sleep," is not so brief as "Uneasy lies the head that wears a crown," where the effect of care on the mind is assimilated to the effect of a heavy crown pressing on the head. *47. General terms are briefer, though less forcible, than particular terms.* Thus: "He devours _literature_, no matter of what kind," is shorter than, "Novels or sermons, poems or histories, no matter what, he devours them all." *47 a. A phrase may be expressed by a word.* "These impressions _can never be forgotten_, i.e. are _indelible_." "The style of this book is _of such a nature that it cannot be understood_, i.e. _unintelligible_." The words "of such a nature that" are often unnecessarily inserted. See the extract from Sir Archibald
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