write "He had been asked by an old friend to call, on his journey
northward, upon his son. Accordingly he visited him on his way."
(_b_) Use, instead of _he_, some name meaning "one who entertains
others." (_c_) Use participle, (_d_) "The man." (_e_) "the
stranger's." (_f_) "his guest." (_g_) Write "could have wished"
to make it clear that "he" means "the host."
35. "Tillotson died in this year. He was exceedingly beloved both by
King William and by Queen Mary (43), who nominated Dr. Tennison,
Bishop of Lincoln, to succeed him."
36. "(_a_) The entertainment was arranged with a magnificence that was
(_b_) perfectly _stupendous_ and (_c_) _most unprecedented_, and
which quite kept up his Lordship's _unrivalled_ reputation for
_unparalleled_ hospitality, and, thanks to the _unequalled_ energy of
Mr. Smith, who is _rapidly becoming one of the most effective_
toast-masters in the kingdom, the toasts were given with a spirit
_quite unexampled_ on occasions of this nature; and indeed we were
forcibly reminded in this respect of the _inimitable_ entertainment of
three years ago (2)."
(_a_) Omit most of the epithets, or soften them down. Point out
the contradictions in the sentence as it stands. (_b_) Write "a
remarkable magnificence that quite &c.," thus dispensing with the
following "and." (_c_) Show that "most" is superfluous.
37. "If we compare Shakespeare with the other dramatic authors of the
Elizabethan era, _his wonderful superiority to them in the_ (15)
_knowledge of human nature_ is _what_ (15 _a_) _principally strikes
us_."
38. "The prince found himself at once in sore perplexity how to
provide himself with the commonest comforts or even necessaries of
life, when he landed on this desolate coast, being (33) accustomed to
luxury."
39. "This make-shift policy recommended itself to the succeeding
_ministers_ (_a_) (50), _both because they were timid and because they
were prejudiced_, and they were delighted to _excuse_ (_b_) (13)
_themselves by quoting_ the example of one who (_c_) (34) had
controlled the Liberals and humoured the Conservatives, (37) commended
himself to the country at large by his unfailing good-humour, and
(_d_) (44) (37) done nothing worthy of the name of statesman."
(_a_) "to the timidity and prejudices of &c." (_b_) "shelter
themselves behind." (_c_) "while he had at once." (_d_) "had yet
done."
40. "William Shakespeare
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