hallowes,
The whiles that loue it steres, and fortune rowes;
6 Loue my lewd Pilot hath a restlesse mind
And fortune Boteswaine no assuraunce knowes,
8 But saile withouten starres, gainst tide and wind:
How can they other do, sith both are bold and blind?

1 "For else my feeble vessel, crazed and cracked

else > otherwise
crazed > damaged [weakened by multiple hairline fissures]

2 Through your strong buffets and outrageous blows,

outrageous > violent; intemperate
blows > blows, strokes; blasts of wind

3 Cannot endure, but needs it must be wracked

needs > of necessity, perforce
wracked > wrecked, shipwrecked; ruined

4 On the rough rocks, or on the sandy shallows,
5 While Love it steers, and Fortune rows;

Love > [Cupid; on his blindness, see 304.6:8]

6 Love, my lewd pilot, has a restless mind,

lewd > unlearned; bungling; worthless; sorry, poor; lewd, lascivious

7 And Fortune, boatswain, no assurance knows,

assurance > steadiness, intrepidity

8 But sail without stars, gainst tide and wind:

stars > [benefit of navigation by the stars]
gainst > against

9 How can they other do, sith both are bold and blind?

sith > since

304.10

Thou God of winds, that raignest in the seas,
2 That raignest also in the Continent,
At last blow vp some gentle gale of ease,
4 The which may bring my ship, ere it be rent,
Vnto the gladsome port of her intent:
6 Then when I shall my selfe in safety see,
A table for eternall moniment
8 Of thy great grace, and my great ieopardee,
Great _Neptune_, I auow to hallow vnto thee.

1 "You god of winds, that reign in the seas,
2 That reign also in the continent,

continent > land

3 At last blow up some gentle gale of ease,
4 Which may bring my ship, ere she be rent,

rent > shattered

5 To the gladsome port of her intent:

intent > purpose

6 Then when I shall myself in safety see,
7 A table for eternal monument

table > votive tablet

8 Of your great grace, and my great jeopardy,
9 Great Neptune, I avow to hallow to you."

Neptune > ("Thou God of winds" (line 1) is Aeolus, so her principal
supplication might be addressed to Neptune as the "sea of sorrow"
of 304.8:1)
avow > vow

304.11

Then sighing softly sore, and inly deepe,
2 She shut vp all her plaint in priuy griefe;
For her great courage would not let her weepe,
4 Till that