FREE BOOKS

Author's List




PREV.   NEXT  
|<   28   29   30   31   32   33   34   35   36   37   38   39   40   41   42   43   44   45   46   47   48   49   50   51   52  
53   54   55   56   57   58   59   60   61   62   63   64   65   66   67   68   69   70   71   72   73   74   75   76   77   >>   >|  
that what was burned. And last of all we shall give the time since that is of least importance to the average reader. This would be the result: | Fire of unknown origin wrecked the top | |of the six-story warehouse at 393-395 | |Washington street, used by the United | |States army as a medical supply | |store-room for the Department of the | |East, destroying a large number of tents, | |blankets, cots, and other bedding, today. | We might as well have put the _what_ before the _where_ or altered the lead in any other way. But we would always begin with the word "fire" and answer all the questions that the reader might ask--in one short simple sentence. This constitutes our lead. We have told the casual reader what he wants to know about the fire. We give him more details about the fire if he wants to read them, but after we have stated the case clearly in the lead we no longer reckon his time so carefully and allow ourselves some latitude in the telling. After the lead we begin the story from the beginning and tell it in its logical order from start to finish, always bearing in mind that the editor may chop off a paragraph or two at the end. Hence the second paragraph of the story as it appeared in _The Mail_ begins: | John Smith, a man employed in the | |stock-room on the sixth floor, saw smoke | |rolling out of one corner and notified | |other employees in the building, while | |Patrolman Hogan turned in an alarm. | We are back at the beginning now and telling things as they came. The next paragraph of the story tells us how they fought the fire, and the third tells us how they finally brought it under control. The last paragraph of the story reads: | There are three such warehouses in the | |country, one at St. Louis, another at San | |Francisco, but the one in this city is by | |far the largest. In it are kept supplies | |for the Departments of the East, Gulf, | |Cuba, Porto Rico, and the Philippines. | The editor of _The Mail_ had plenty of space that day and saw fit to run this last paragraph, but we should not have lost much had he chopped it off. Perhaps the reporter's copy contained still another paragraph telling a
PREV.   NEXT  
|<   28   29   30   31   32   33   34   35   36   37   38   39   40   41   42   43   44   45   46   47   48   49   50   51   52  
53   54   55   56   57   58   59   60   61   62   63   64   65   66   67   68   69   70   71   72   73   74   75   76   77   >>   >|  



Top keywords:
paragraph
 
telling
 

reader

 

editor

 

beginning

 
building
 

turned

 

Patrolman

 
contained
 

begins


appeared

 

employed

 

rolling

 

corner

 

notified

 

things

 

employees

 
finally
 

Departments

 
supplies

reporter

 

Philippines

 

Perhaps

 

chopped

 

plenty

 

largest

 
brought
 
control
 

fought

 

Francisco


country

 
warehouses
 

Department

 

destroying

 
number
 

supply

 
United
 
States
 

medical

 

blankets


altered
 

bedding

 

street

 

importance

 
average
 

burned

 
result
 

warehouse

 

Washington

 

unknown