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purpose or result, of course, must be played up. The one point that the reporter should remember is that a well-written lead begins with the result or purpose of the meeting or announcement rather than with the name of the meeting or the name of the body that makes the announcement. Never begin a story thus: "At a meeting of the Press Club held in the Auditorium last night it was resolved that----" Transpose the sentence and begin with a statement of what was resolved. In the following story the order is wrong: | The Supreme Court of the United States,| |through the opinion delivered by Justice | |Vandevanter, today declared | |constitutional the employers' liability | |law of 1908. | The import of the decision is buried; it should be written thus: | The employers' liability law of 1908 | |was today declared constitutional by the | |Supreme Court of the United States. | |Justice Vandevanter delivered the opinion| |of the court, made in four cases. | In these stories, as in all other news stories, the lead must begin with the fact or statement that gives the story news value. Burying this fact or statement behind two or three lines of explanation spoils the effectiveness of the lead. A student of journalism may gain very good practice in the writing of news stories by looking over the leads that appear in the daily papers and transposing those leads which bury their news behind explanations. The first line of type in a lead is like a shop's show window and it must not be used for the display of packing cases. =8. Stories on Other Printed Matter.=--A large part of a newspaper's space, especially in smaller cities, is devoted to stories based on printed bulletins, announcements, city directories, legislative bills, and published reports of various kinds. Sometimes a news story is written upon a pamphlet that was issued for advertising purposes--because there is some news in it. In all of these stories the reporter must look through the pamphlet to find something of news value or something that has a significant relation to other news. Smaller papers often print stories on the new city directory; the increase or decrease in population is treated as news and a very interesting story may be written on a comparison of the names
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