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r to the beginning. This may be done by selecting the most interesting parts of the story--by picking out the high spots, as it were. In this story the high spots are the attempted robbery, the pursuit, and the arrest. The details that fill in between are interesting, but not so interesting as these high spots. Hence these high spots of interest must be pushed forward toward the beginning. After the lead the story would begin at the beginning and tell the affair briefly by high spots in their proper order. It might be something like this: | As Charles Young was closing his | |grocery last evening a young man came in | |and asked for a pound of butter. Young | |turned to get it and his customer struck | |him over the head with a chair. The | |grocer grappled with his assailant and | |they fell through the front door. In the | |scramble, the robber broke away and ran | |down Sixth street. A young woman who was | |passing screamed and ran after him until | |he disappeared into a saloon. | | | |The young woman called Policeman Smith, | |who was standing nearby on Grand avenue, | |and the latter found the would-be robber | |on the roof of the saloon. After a | |struggle, Smith arrested the man, with | |the aid of another policeman. | The above account tells us briefly the most interesting parts of the story. A copyreader might not find it perfect, for the assault is allotted too much space and the pursuit too little, but it tells the story in its baldest aspect. This, with the lead, could be run alone. However, perhaps the story is worth more space; at any rate, many interesting details have been omitted. If so, go back to the most interesting part of the story--the assault, perhaps, or the pursuit--and tell it with more details. Then retell some other part with more details. If your readers are interested enough to read beyond the first three paragraphs they want details and will not be so particular about the order--for they already know how the story is going to end. This is one way of meeting the requirements of logical order and dwindling interest. This is a particularly hard story to arrange in
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