more series of events
belong in the same story only if they finally come together at some time,
usually at the point of the story. They should be carried along together
so that the reader shall have in mind all that is necessary for the
understanding of the point when it is reached. In short stories the
changes from one series to another are close together. In a long book one
or more chapters may give one series of incidents, while the following
chapters may be concerned with a parallel series of incidents. Notice the
introductory paragraph of each chapter in Scott's _Ivanhoe_ or Cooper's
_The Last of the Mohicans_. Many of these indicate that a new series of
events is to be related.
It will be of advantage in writing a narrative to construct an outline as
indicated in Section 84. Such an outline will assist us in making our
narrative clear by giving it unity, coherence, and emphasis.
EXERCISES
1. Name events that have occurred in your school or city which could be
related in their exact time-order. Relate one of them orally.
2. Name two accidents that could not be related in their exact time-order.
Relate one of them orally.
3. Name subjects for real narratives that would need to be written in the
first person; in the third person.
4. In telling about a runaway accident, what points would you mention if
you were writing a short account for a newspaper?
5. What points would you add if you were writing to some one who was
acquainted with the persons in the accident?
6. Consider the choice and arrangement of details in the next magazine
story that you read.
+Theme LXXVIII.+--_Write a personal narrative in which the time-order can
be carefully followed._
Suggested subjects:--
1. The irate conductor.
2. A personal adventure with a window.
3. An interrupted nap.
4. Lost in the woods.
5. In a runaway.
6. An amusing adventure.
7. A day at grandfather's.
(Consider the unity and coherence of the theme.)
+Theme LXXIX.+--_Write in the third person a true narrative in which
different events are going on at the same time._
Suggested subjects:--
1. A skating accident.
2. The hunters hunted.
3. Capsized on the river.
4. How he won the race.
5. An experience with a balky horse.
6. The search for a lost child.
7. How they missed each other.
8. A strange adventure.
9. A tip over in a bobsleigh.
(How many series of events have you in your narrative? Are
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