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at all | he meets So forlorn; And he shakes | his fee |-ble head, That it seems | as if | he said, They are gone. 4. The mos |-sy mar |-bles rest On the lips | that he | has press'd In their bloom; And the names | he lov'd | to hear Have been carv'd | for man |-y a year On the tomb. 5. My grand |-mamma | has said,-- Poor old La |-dy! she | is dead Long ago,-- That he had | a Ro |-man nose, And his cheek | was like | a rose In the snow. 6. But now | his nose | is thin, And it rests | upon | his chin Like a staff; And a crook | is in | his back And a mel |-anchol |-y crack In his laugh. 7. I know | it is | a sin For me [thus] | to sit | and grin At him here; But the old | three-cor |-ner'd hat, And the breech |-es, and | all that, Are so queer! 8. And if I | should live | to be The last leaf | upon | the tree In the spring,-- Let them smile, | as I | do now, At the old | forsak |-en bough Where I cling." OLIVER W. HOLMES: _The Pioneer_, 1843, p. 108. OBSERVATIONS. OBS. 1.--Composite verse, especially if the lines be short, is peculiarly liable to uncertainty, and diversity of scansion; and that which does not always abide by one chosen order of quantities, can scarcely be found agreeable; it must be more apt to puzzle than to please the reader. The eight stanzas of this last example, have eight lines of _iambic trimeter_; and, since seven times in eight, this metre holds the first place in the stanza, it is a double fault, that one such line seems strayed from its proper position. It would be better to prefix the word _Now_ to the fourth line, and to mend the forty-third thus:-- "And should | I live | to be"-- The trissyllabic feet of this piece, as I scan it, are numerous; being the sixteen short lines of monometer, and the twenty-four initial feet of the lines of seven syllables. Every one of the forty--(except the thirty-sixth, "_The_ last leaf"--) begins with a monosyllable which may be varied in quantity; so that, with stress laid on this monosyllable, the foot becomes an _amphimac_; without such stress, an _anapest_. OBS. 2.--I incline to read this piece as composed of iambs and anapests; but E. A. Poe, who has commended "the effective harmony of these lines,"
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