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ess. 5. To present an address to his Majesty. 6. Begging leave to lay before him complaints. 7. Complaints excited. 8. By encroachments and usurpations. 9. By the legislature of a part of the empire. 10. On the rights which God and the laws have given 11. Equally to all. This is the first sentence. In it he has put the Introduction, the Bill of Rights, the Indictment, a proposition to Congress to go a begging before his Majesty, and several other particulars. But let us continue with the next sentence: SECOND PERIOD. 12. To represent to his Majesty. 13. That his states. 14. Humble application. 15. To Imperial Throne. 16. To get redress of injured rights. 17. No answer. Here there is no relation between the _beginning_ of the sentence and the conclusion. THIRD PERIOD. 18. Humbly to hope. 19. By joint address. _a._ Penned in truth. _b._ Divested of terms of servility. 20. Would persuade his Majesty. 21. That we ask no favors. 22. But rights. 23. Shall obtain a respectful acceptance. 24. His Majesty will think. 25. We have reason to expect. 26. When he reflects. _a._ That he is only the chief officer. _b._ Appointed by law. _c._ Circumscribed with powers. _d._ To assist in working the great machine of government. _e._ Erected for their use. _f._ Are therefore subject to their superintendence. 27. And that these our rights. 28. As well as invasions. 29. May be laid before his Majesty. _a._ To take a view of them. _b._ From their origin. _c._ And first settlement of these countries. It is only necessary to remark on the above, that thirty or forty subjects can hardly be handled successfully in three periods. How different is this from the Declaration, or, in fact, from any production of Mr. Paine's. In the three great requisites of style, _Precision_, _Unity_, and _Strength_, where Mr. Paine is so perfect, we see great defects in Jefferson; and in the fourth, _Harmony_, a complete failure. If we now take the "Summary View," and submit it to the same critical analysis as I have the Declaration of Independence, we will find the same defects in it, as a whole, that we find in the first paragraph, which I have just analyzed. There is a complete mixture of all subjects. But this I leave to the reader, should he question the truth of my assertion. If we now turn to th
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