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e plot as would five or six scenes. Letters should be short and to the point, but they should also tell as much as possible of _what can not be told in action_. Better a single letter of thirty-five words which tells everything than two or three notes of a line or two each that only suggest what the writer means. Some of the so-called "letters" which are seen on the screen are simply ridiculous on account of their very brevity. If it is a mere note that is dashed off and sent to one of the characters, or a note left where it will be found by someone after the writer has gone away, its brevity is allowable; but when a "letter" is written by a man to an old friend of his--a friend who, he is told, is living in a distant city, when for years he has supposed him to be dead--and contains but seventeen words, it is likely to make the spectator doubt the strength of the former friendship. It is not always necessary actually to write a long letter; but it is best in such instances to _suggest_ that a long letter has been written. This may be accomplished in two ways: You may either show a paragraph in the body of the letter, with a line or two just before and just after it, thus: On screen, letter. and it was from him that I learned the truth. I'll leave for Wheeling on the first train tomorrow, and hope to clasp your hand again before Monday night. Honestly, old man, it seems too, etc. or you may write out the ending of the letter in such a way as to suggest that much more has been said in the forepart of the message, thus: On screen, letter, folded down to show only this: so I'll leave for Wheeling on the first train tomorrow, and hope to clasp your hand again before Monday night. Honestly, old man, it seems too good to be true. I won't be able to believe that what Morgan told me _is_ true until I see you with my own eyes. Until then, believe me to be As ever, your sincere friend, Stephen Loring. To illustrate the way a letter will consume footage, we reproduce one for which fifteen feet were allowed. Lord Cornwallis: Am now within forty miles of Charlottesville. Thomas Jefferson and the entire Virginia Assembly will be my prisoners today. Tarleton. As we know, a letter will sometimes be written by a character in one scene, but the spectators will not learn its exact contents--though they may know
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