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home went He, And said, I have been in yonder town As far as you can see." Some versions give 'As after you can see.' Jesus repeats the story precisely as it has been told, with His request to the children and their rude answer. Whereupon Mary says:-- "Though You are but a maiden's child, Born in an ox's stall, Though art the Christ, the King of Heaven, And the Saviour of them all. "Sweet Jesus, go down to yonder town As far as the Holy Well, And take away those sinful souls And dip them deep in Hell. "Nay, nay, sweet Jesus said, Nay, nay, that may not be; There are too many sinful souls Crying out for the help of Me." On this exquisite close the carol might well end, as Mr. Bullen with his usual fine judgment makes it end. But the old copies give an additional stanza, and a very silly one:-- "O then spoke the angel Gabriel, Upon one good St. Stephen, Although you're but a maiden's child, You are the King of Heaven." 'One good St. Stephen' is obviously an ignorant misprint for 'one good set steven,' _i.e._ 'appointed time,' and so it appears in Mr. Bramley's book, and in Mr. W. H. Husk's _Songs of the Nativity_. But the stanza is foolish, and may be dismissed. To amend the text of the children's answer is less legitimate. Yet one feels sorely tempted; and I cannot help suggesting that the original ran something like this:-- "But they made answer to Him, No: They were lords and ladies all; And He was but a maiden's child, Born in an ox's stall. "Sweet Jesus turned Him round about, And He neither laughed nor smiled, But the tears came trickling from His eyes To be but a maiden's child. . . ." I plead for this suggestion: (1) that it adds nothing to the text and changes but one word; (2) that it removes nothing but the weak and unrhyming 'Like water from the skies'; and (3) that it leads directly to Mary's answer:-- "Though you are but a maiden's child, Born in an ox's stall," &c. But it were better to hunt out the original than to accept any emendation; and I hope you will agree that the original of this little poem, so childlike and delicately true, is worth hunting for. "The carol," says Mr. Husk, "has a widely-spread popularity. On a broadside copy printed at Gravesend,"--presumably the one from which '
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