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OR MY BROTHER WOULD HAVE GONE DOWN TO SEE WHAT WAS UP." Bill takes up the lead she gives by pretending eagerness as to what happened, but the officer, after a hasty look out over the fire escape, turns and hurries from the room. Bill sighs relievedly, and looks at Florence with the same sort of light in his eyes that one sees in those of a faithful dog. This dog-like devotion is to be the developing keynote of Bill's character. 89--Roof of house. Night. Policeman comes up on roof, looking around. 90--Ella's room. Gas-lit. Bill is thanking Florence. She tells him that she will go down and see whether the coast is clear, and he sits down with a grateful look as she goes quietly out.[54] [Footnote 54: Compare the present scene and the one following, in respect to varying treatment of conveyed information. Here the girl merely indicates what she intends to do, and her statement of the fact is not given as dialogue-in-scene, since the next scene will make clear her unregistered words; but see how dialogue-in-scene is employed in the scene that comes next, emphasizing in the briefest way just what the player feels by what she thinks and unconsciously forms with her lips.] 91--Front of "Row." Night. From the tenement doorway. The injured man is being made to stand. Florence comes into the scene, pausing on stoop of the "Row" and watches as the injured party feigns great pain, and gasps: _Cut-in leader--_ "HONEST--HE NEAR CROAKED ME. I'M DYIN'--ALL SHOT TO PIECES. AN' THE WORST IS I DIDN'T GIT A CHANST TO SHOOT BACK AT HIM." The ambulance men laugh and tell him to be on his way; he is more scared than hurt. Florence's face becomes tense. Her lips form the thought that flashes into her mind. "He lied--to me!" She turns and goes into house. 92--Ella's room. Gas-lit. Bill looks up eagerly as Florence comes in. Then he stares as she goes swiftly toward the table drawer. He is quick, but not swift enough, in his rush to forestall her as she gets his revolver and "breaks" it, so that the empty cartridge and five loaded ones drop into her hand. 93--Bust of hand holding discharged cartridge. Register the fact that it has been fired. 94--Back to 92. Florence looks up slowly. Bill figures that she will give him up now, and gives a quick, hunted look
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