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y to pretend to arm ourselves against the accidents of life, by heaping up treasures, which nothing can protect us against but the good providence of our Heavenly Father." _Which_, in this sentence, grammatically refers to _treasures;_ and this would convert the whole period into nonsense. The sentence should have been thus constructed, "It is folly to pretend, by heaping up treasures, to arm ourselves against the _accidents_ of life, against _which_ nothing can protect us but the good providence of our Heavenly Father." STRENGTH. By the _strength_ of a sentence is meant such an arrangement of its several words and members, as exhibits the sense to the best advantage, and gives every word and member its due weight and force. 1. The first rule for promoting the strength of a sentence, is, to _take from it all redundant words and members._ Whatever can be easily supplied in the mind, should generally be omitted; thus, "Content with deserving a triumph, he refused the honor of it," is better than to say, "_Being_ content with deserving a triumph." &c. "They returned back again to the same city from whence they came forth." If we expunge from this snort sentence _five_ which are were expletives, it will be much more neat and forcible thus, "They returned to the city whence they came." But we should be cautious of pruning so closely as to give a hardness and dryness to the style. Some leaves must be left to shelter and adorn the fruit. 2. _Particular attention to the use of copulatives, relatives, and all the particles employed for transition and connexion, is required_. In compositions of an elevated character, the _relative_ should generally be inserted. An injudicious repetition of _and_ enfeebles style; but when enumerating objects which we wish to have appear as distinct from each other as possible, it may be repeated with peculiar advantage; thus, "Such a man may fall a victim to power; but truth, _and_ reason, _and_ liberty, would fall with him." 3. _Dispose of the capital word or words in that part of the sentence in which they will make the most striking impression_. 4. _Cause the members of a sentence to go on rising in their importance one above another_. In a sentence of two members, the longer should generally be the concluding one. 5. _Avoid concluding a sentence with an adverb, a preposition, or any inconsiderable word, unless it be emphatical_. 6. _Where two things are compared or contrasted wi
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